"True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the common place"
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay consider instances in which the statement does not hold true
Beauty, is the good distinguishing factor about a thing or an individual and would always be picked out by the eye or heart. This art picked by the eye or our heart triggers our thinking, expands the length of our creativity and also pacifies or sooths our heart. Exceptionality is the output of beauty and so it can be said true beauty is exceptional. Exceptionality can be picked in places we least expect mostly clothed as the common. Therefore, I assert true beauty is something found in the common place.
Beauty which I see as exceptional is a deviation from the orthodox and for example photographers are keen to taking amazing shots of things in places we term as common but because of our work intense attitude we miss out on this ‘detail’ called beauty. As a result of the society we live in, we get used to following the tune of the band wagon looking for the beauty in things we consider as exceptional. Photographers on the other hand have mastered the art of calmness and thorough observation to pick exceptions in a place termed common. A year ago, in a certain local street in Nigeria while shooting a movie, the concentration was obviously on the people auditioned for the place but just after taking the shots of the scene. Morenike, a lady just selling her bread was on the picture and stood out as exceptional. That was true beauty and it became a topic for some weeks in the public.
Again, the good book of the Bible read by Christians gave a story about a Man who was on a long journey. During the course of the journey he was beaten by robbers and lost his procession to them, in his time of need for help, people I would term ‘exceptional’ who looked maybe well dressed and were in a position to help all looked past him but he was helped later on by a commoner (the good Samaritan). At that time of travail, I suppose nothing else mattered to the traveler but a search a helper who would be a exception from the supposed exceptional. To the good heart of his New friend (the Samaritan) he would forever remember has true beauty. This type of beauty can only be found in the heart and it is usually exhibited mostly by commoners who have lived their lives mostly in the common place, they have little or nothing and so have no fear of losing possessions but are ready to render help to someone they see in dire need. On the other hand, the high class (exceptional) people have so much and fear losing much, this ultimately reduces their chances of helping and therefore they cannot exhibit the beauty of the heart.
Sometimes, in rare circumstances true beauty is found in the exceptional and this is mostly seen in large cities where there are series of sky scrappers or by artist who only display their work in serene, high class environment for customers to see.
True beauty in itself is an exceptional thing but mostly has its solace in the common place. If you look back and probe deep about where you have experienced true beauty, you would come to a realize that it is clothed in the common. True beauty can only be found in the common place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gers our thinking, expands the length of our creativity and also pacifies or soot...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'During'.
Suggestion: During
... about a Man who was on a long journey. During the course of the journey he was beaten by robbers an...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eler but a search a helper who would be a exception from the supposed exceptional...
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Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (New) must be used with a third-person verb: 'friends'.
Suggestion: friends
...ceptional. To the good heart of his New friend the Samaritan he would forever remember...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...erienced true beauty, you would come to a realize that it is clothed in the common. True ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i suppose, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5375 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70249082009 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2718356858 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176473054676 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684007288603 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582840222486 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117837820893 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583885226589 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.