From a young age we are encouraged to make some recurrent degrees, like medicine and ingeneering. We are said that those fields would give us good economy, social position, and we will be successful.
I think that this idea is a legacy from a different generation and a generalized idea that is imposed on us. It is important that we change our point of view. Given the current technology, that allows massive communication and the availavility of information, new perspectives are open. Nowadays a person can succeed doing the most unexpected things. It is enough to see how people earns a lot of money on some online platforms such as YouTube or Instagram. So, true success is not measured by the greatness of the goals.
Secondly, the action of setting a goal for oneself is very different from the action of achieving that goal. For example, we all claimed that we would be astronauts on our early days, and almost none of us succeed in that mission. True success comes from attaining a goal, which requires a lot of hard work, regardless of the specific goal. Even the simpler and joyfully tasks are difficult to accomplish continuously during a long period, and that is where success resides.
Moreover, true success is not measured by the number of goals one sets for oneself thoughout one's life. A lot of different goals is, instead, a sign of a not focussed person, who probably has an unstable mind.
Hence, success is more related to the work and persistence on a goal, than the goal itself.
- the following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper."The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time perio 23
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta 50
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...of goals one sets for oneself thoughout ones life. A lot of different goals is, inst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79770992366 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74116227741 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0230802071 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184028698172 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598007120512 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754396315614 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100719340298 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712982685609 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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