Our life revovle's around the word "Success" always.Success can be defined in various way,each one has their own perspective about it. Everyone works day and night everyday to achieve success in life.There are different types to measure success ,for example it can be treated as the amount of wealth one has or if he is happy with the current life and various other factors.
Now here,let us suppose two people person A and B.And person A have set his goal to buy a mid range car and a house of 3000 sqft and so,on the other hand,person B had set his goal to buy a sports car and bunglowI.If we examine these two cases,i think we can have a proper idea about the argument given.After few years,person A has bought his required desires and is happy with that.but if we compare him to the other person we can tell that he is not successful in the society.But A is happy with what he has and he is satisfied with his life.
if we move on consider the second case,where he is not successful in achieving what he thought of ,yet he is in better position of person B.A must be thinking that B should be proud of himself as he is in better state of position compared to him.but the fact is that B isn't happy with himself and consider him as a failure.
so by above analysis ,we can conclude that true success can be measures in terms of the goals one set for oneself and also if he does not care about what the society think about him/her.
- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead. 50
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 270.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37407407407 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61453413665 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 23.0359550562 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.835115539 60.3974514979 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.2 118.986275619 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 54.0 23.4991977007 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.21951772744 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171173259373 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11693120199 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611072727574 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125993905818 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663523216864 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.2143820225 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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