i strongly agree with the point. Poeples success are truely measured on the progress they make on their goals. However, success isn't attained from single person's effort only. Let me explain some of my examples below.
Firstly, lets talk about a software company. They have their own objectives to fulfill within certain time limit. And until they fulfill their objectives they don't care about other things. They gets stick to one thing only. They all work to attain their best result so that other company can't get over their inventions.They work on improving or advancing their softwares. So, in such case they aren't concerned with oneself not others. However,their success are measured on how much success you have attained over others.
Secondly,any one political party can be considered. Every political party has their own goal. They have their own morals and rules and regulations and their own publics. They try to prove themselves as a relevant party by fulfilling their statements they have said to their publics. To get their success, they can go to any extent. Their success is counted once their primary goals have been fulfilled. However, although their goals are attained doesnt mean other political party are bad or unsuccessful. They are also working for the welfare of the people with their own goals.
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- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10599078341 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47379178128 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0606782179 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3157894737 118.986275619 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4210526316 23.4991977007 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100717482084 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445424591301 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413620133597 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078014703201 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137638593912 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.17 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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