The speaker mentions about the two types of law as just and unjust laws. I don`t think we can categorize law as just and unjust as it seems too extreme . The illustration of my disagreement is cited in following paragraphs.
To begin with, lets talk about abortion. Some people take abortion as a unjust laws and prohibit abortion. In case of emergency situation too, people aren`t ready to abort as they thinks that they would commit a crime. And in some community and cultural practices, its taken as just law. People are free to abort without any feeling of being culprit.
So, law can never be categorized to just and unjust as every culture doesn`t justifies this as mandate.
Secondly, we can see that many industries are into operation and the reminants and residue they emit has malignant effects on the environment. The industries seems to be doing unjust to the laws regarding deteriorating environment. And talking about doing just to the laws, the industries have to install a high advancement in purifying the malignant residue that deteriorate the environment. On doing so , the cost of maintainance and manufacturing cost becomes so high that the cost of the product becomes high. Moreover, people can`t afford the price and the industries can`t run properly as the revenue can`t be collected as per their investment. So, in this case too, every just laws don`t give that just results.
On the contrary, not all laws are too extreme as the laws are made for everyone`s welfare considering every pros and cons`s sides so that the people with power can`t take over the weak people and the rich can`t dominate the poor one`s. In case of the tax payment, the law seem to be just. As we know that the development work in the country are possible only if the country has enough money and the money comes if people pay tax. So, in this case , the law becomes just.
In sum, we can`t categorize the law as just and unjust.
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...ople aren't ready to abort as they thinks that they would commit a crime. And in ...
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...thout any feeling of being culprit. So, law can never be categorized to just and...
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...alignant effects on the environment. The industries seems to be doing unjust to t...
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...omes if people pay tax. So, in this case , the law becomes just. In sum, we can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, talking about, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94955489614 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85257729638 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486646884273 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8452263955 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204186998538 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916027659767 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099584589761 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158278440303 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775841740111 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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