True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
Success in literal terms is defined as achievement of goals or purposes, however the definition may vary according to every individual’s perspective towards life. I mostly agree with this prompt that suggests true success attainment of goal that one sets for oneself. But I do also agree that success is perspectival and its another meaning is the ability of the individual to create one’s life meaningful for others.
Firstly, every human being has some goal or purpose to achieve in his life. The fact of achieving this goal is what motivates every individual to strive for living their life fully. For e.g. One might desire to become a scientist or research personal and makes his or her dedicated to that field, the fact of becoming a scientist motivates the individual to strive for best. He then sets a milestone for his life and for that individual success in literal is attainment of goals. Many people define success as being wealth or becoming famous, which may be true success for such whose aim is to become a rich or well recognized. Hence, success can be measured as achievement of goals that one sets for oneself.
Secondly, in various multinational companies’ success is in measured in terms of achievement of goals, targets the company achieves in a quarter or financial year. This target motivates the organization to become a better version of itself and over a period of years or months the company grows in terms of manpower, turnover, it might also expand its business overseas. This expansion of company is success with respect to that particular company. For example, Apple was started by Steve Jobs in his garage, according to Steve Jobs Apple’s vision was ‘Building Tools that amplify a human ability’, that’s why Apple integrated Music into iPhones, iPods which established the ability an electronic device to potable music system. So, launching of iPhones and iPods was one of the success that Steve Jobs wished for Apple.
But True Success according to me also means that every individual’s life should somehow enhance other people or things. There are so many problems in today’s world, even in 21st century, some people living in Underdeveloped countries don’t have an access to the basic right of food, shelter, education. Millions succumb to malnutrition every year. According to me, one individual is truly successful, if he put slight efforts to this situation. Our jobs as humans is not to emit carbon footprints but to ensure that every individual has an access basic rights.
To conclude, success’s true definition is perspectival and obscure. To some it might be achievement of goals, for others it might be the ability of an individual to lose himself or herself in search of knowledge using love, joy and gratiyude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... definition may vary according to every individuals perspective towards life I mostly agree...
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Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...the ability of the individual to create ones life meaningful for others Firstly eve...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...self Secondly in various multinational companies success is in measured in terms of achi...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ding Tools that amplify a human ability thats why Apple integrated Music into iPhones...
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Line 3, column 802, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...success that Steve Jobs wished for Apple But True Success according to me also me...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s according to me also means that every individuals life should somehow enhance other peopl...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ople living in Underdeveloped countries dont have an access to the basic right of fo...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...g in Underdeveloped countries dont have an access to the basic right of food shelter educ...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f knowledge using love joy and gratiyude
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88260869565 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63714917394 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467391304348 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 460.0 23.0359550562 1997% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2246.0 118.986275619 1888% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 460.0 23.4991977007 1958% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 114.0 5.21951772744 2184% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382062252049 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.382062252049 0.0831039109588 460% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213983791567 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125240384003 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 231.6 14.1392134831 1638% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -395.42 48.8420337079 -810% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 182.7 12.1743820225 1501% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.95 8.38706741573 357% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 186.0 11.2143820225 1659% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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