True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
Success is a very important for everybody. The men likely can not be satisfated if he is not successful. This term is very complicated and every men has different opinion about what is success for him. The only thing that join success for everybody is that every success has the goal. I am strongly convinced that success can be evalueted primarily in terms of the goals. There are a lot of examples where people can measure their success using their aims.
The first reason for my point of view is that the men will not have good career without goal, moreover, his success in work depends on the goal that he decided to achieve. It is very important to decide to achieve goal that at this moment is unreal. However, on the way to the goal it becomes more real. Of cousre, to be a president of the corporation is too ambitiously, but if people will try to do their best for this goal they will achieve good resuts and they will be successful. In other words, success directly depends on the goal and, consequently, can be can be measured by how ambition is the goal.
Another reason for my point of view is that not only in work success can be evaluated in terms of the aims. Family is one of the main parts of people’s life. The mojority have the goal to create famile, in other words, to find husband of wife. Actually, the problem of finding your other half is not difficult and most of people achieve their goals. However, to be happy in marriage is a real success, but not many people decided to achieve this goal and, furthermore, begin to work for it. This is the differese between true success to create strog happy family and just to achive easy aim to find wife or husband.
It has been seen, that success primarely is measured by the goals. The goals define the future success and it is very important to set ambitious goal in work or rational goal in creating family. People have only one live and it is important to be successful in all fields of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: can be
... depends on the goal and, consequently, can be can be measured by how ambition is the goal. ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ng your other half is not difficult and most of people achieve their goals. However, to be hap...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...success to create strog happy family and just to achive easy aim to find wife or ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223325062035 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.166253101737 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868486352357 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0645161290323 0.0497285424764 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496277915633 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119106699752 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0272952853598 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39749203022 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0397022332506 0.030933414821 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0843672456576 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248138957816 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00992555831266 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1979.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 363.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45179063361 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278236914601 0.366273622748 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209366391185 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118457300275 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0771349862259 0.132149295362 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39749203022 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440771349862 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.2938846585 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.15 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5079101018 59.4972553346 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.95 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.0866391185 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.3185840708 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361720125826 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138605701935 0.123202303941 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0663141227971 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529462287585 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974145681312 0.149214159877 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157491875079 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988745260708 0.0892212321368 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497820571124 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0663651312449 0.0692045440612 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272387111555 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416546904439 0.0653680567796 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.