Art, the replica of man's thoughts, has been celebrated as diamond in a crown of every kingdom. Art has various forms like, painting, sculpting, architecture etc. The true greatness of a work of art relies on the massive audience it attracts. The work may be a painting or a sculpture, the more meaningful and eye catchy, the more it gets a place in the hall of fame.
To begin with, art can be defined as the replica of mankind. Every artist, induces his thoughts and imaginations into his work. Art is always an materialized form of human emotions and thoughts. For instance, men who lived in caves, used natural colors to draw what he sees and what he wanted to see. Though they seem to be mere doodles to us, many historians learned the evolution of mankind, from them. Thanks to the cavemen, their work of art was understandable.
Secondly, art was a source of entertainment before the invent of televisions and internet. So it had the need to reach a vast audience, and it would be authorized as a fine piece of art when it satisfies the tastes of people widely. The best example of a fine art, that stole the hearts of many art admirers, is the "Monalisa" of Leonardo Da Vinci. It is one of the aesthetic works of the legend, Leonardo Da Vinci. The intention of the painter was to picture a women with a mysterious smile and beauty that enchants the viewer with awe, and he also articulated his vision. The painting is still treasured by the Louvre, for its magnificence and it stays an inspiration for every artist to create their masterpiece like the "Monalisa".
To conclude, art being an emotion expressed through colors or shapes or any form, need to touch the lives of the people. Art work is considered great when, even a nomad feels the life in the work. Thus the work of art may be of any significance, but its greatness can be defined only when it is understood by massive audience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e it gets a place in the hall of fame. To begin with, art can be defined as...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266169154229 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.136815920398 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0572139303483 0.0880659088768 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0199004975124 0.0497285424764 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0522388059701 0.0444667217837 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114427860697 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0248756218905 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95808180068 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273631840796 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.121890547264 0.0997080785238 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0124378109453 0.0249443105267 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0199004975124 0.0148568991511 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1950.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 342.0 452.878318584 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70175438596 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289473684211 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228070175439 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157894736842 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122807017544 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95808180068 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 219.290929204 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 59.7663219127 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5917316037 59.4972553346 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.631578947 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 40.8070175439 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.94047619048 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.574706246061 0.391690518653 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113651586988 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0818540045424 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538522791155 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124746881263 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242156625903 0.161403998019 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995220198364 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388792332127 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616639580793 0.0692045440612 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.432404926954 0.275328986314 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347413879961 0.0653680567796 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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