A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned.
There may be different education system in different university in the world. A university may have broad courses and other may have narrow, specialized study of single discipline. A true university might include broad curses in stead of narroe specialized course. But some university may include specialized study of single discipline which is needed to succed in professional career. By exploring the broad area of liberal arts courses, students can really learn. A true university education incudes broad area than specialized. It can be convinced with the evidences and examples wich is presented below.
Tribhuvan University, oldest university, which is located in Nepal have different courses; in the liberal arts department it has bread courses. Students graduated from this university has been practicing professional life. One of the alumni is Pramod Kharel, one of the famous and adroit artist, has been providing very successful arts in the filed. His expertise, broad knowledge shows that Tribhuva University's broad syllabus really helped him to acquire broad knowedge. It may be true that specialized study of singlr discipline can give someone a good job, handsome stipend but it can't deny that by exploring broad discipline students truely learn which is proved by the example mentioned above.
Similarly, aother example is Pokhara University, a second largest university, which is also located in western part Nepal encompasses more broad courses. Shiva Pariyar, another popular artist in Nepal, is the epitome how exploring broad area can give true and diverse knowledge of any field. He is so successful due ot his broad knowledge; he is a singer, song writer, composer and musician, dou to his broad spectrum of knowledge he is succeding in the field. A true university introduces broad area rather than specialized course in their syllabus which has been proved by seeing the success rate and performance of their alumni in their field.
Some other, however, argue that a true university must include specialized study if single area rather than encompassing broad area. While this claim may be true from getting job perspective, evidences and examples attests that true university includes broad spectrum and the students from that university really learned. The examples portrayed above verify that a true university includes broad spectrum of courses. Evidences and examples also verifies that only be studying broad spectrum of liberal arts can students become really knowledgeable
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Suggestion: instead of
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Suggestion: , the oldest
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, second, similarly, so, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45384615385 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78957507975 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458974358974 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9945054629 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.35 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428960226257 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141173787281 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082007934472 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280486463428 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837968108745 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.