"The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments."

Essay topics:

"The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments."

The author claims that the artistic reations are the true of civilization rather than scientific accomplishments.

According to me, the true value of civilization is the social, economical, cultural and the scientific well-being of the people in a society or

nation. Civilization is an amalgation of both artistic creations and scientific accomplishments. I am not conveinced with the claim

that civilization is more about artistic creations rather than its scientific accomplishments. This can be illustrated with some examples.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ther than scientific accomplishments. According to me, the true value of civilization is the ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...well-being of the people in a society or nation. Civilization is an amalgation of...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nation
...-being of the people in a society or nation. Civilization is an amalgation of both ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...s. I am not conveinced with the claim that civilization is more about artistic cre...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 58.6224719101 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 463.0 2235.4752809 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 78.0 442.535393258 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9358974359 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.9718278662 4.55969084622 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76436542784 2.79657885939 135% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 215.323595506 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 136.8 704.065955056 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1334498833 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428235500408 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229554892844 0.0831039109588 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143050066315 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258353391501 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899458723307 0.0667264976115 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.1639044944 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 100.480337079 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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