The topic raises a controversial issue of whether, one must study its major cities or not to understand the most important characteristics of a society. Indisputably, no one can understand the essential characteristics by studying major cities without including the minor cities. Nevertheless, it is very important to understand the small towns, cities to truly understand the characteristics of the society. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that one must study its major cities to understand the vital characteristics of a society, and would argue that small towns, cities are also important to consider to truly understand the essential characteristics of the society.
First of all, in a developing country, where majority of its population lives in rural or town areas. It is important to consider the small towns and cities. I would like to point out that the bucolic areas are the ones whom truly capture the sense of characteristics one needs to understand the society in a whole. To illustrate, let us look at the example of India, where 70% of its population lives in rural areas and only 30% of its population lives in urban areas (Major Cities). In this circumstance, obviously, one won’t be able to understand India considering only the major cities. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that rural areas play a very important role in understanding the important characteristics of a society.
Furthermore, to know about the cultural and traditional background of India, looking into their major cities will only provide an overview. Metropolitan cities like Delhi, Bangalore etc have very less to offer in terms of India's history of culture and traditions. To truly understand their society and background, it is necessary to visit the countryside or further explore some other cities to learn about their culture, heritage and past.
Admittedly, another popular example is Paris in France. Paris is no doubt the fashion hub of the country and has some widely popular tourist attractions but looking alone into Paris would not give enough information about entire France like their major contribution in Cheese production, wine and vineyards, perfumes etc. For that it is necessary to look into the small villages and towns and not just the major cities.
To sum up, Major cities will always provide information and various important characteristics of a society. However, one can truly know about a country's culture and society by studying the smaller cities and towns along with the major cities for a more accurate knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, no doubt, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24817518248 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07680756787 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442822384428 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0069440139 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226528231313 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898116713789 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719739539844 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124962196832 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916438026829 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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