Education is the most important aspect in Human's life. Personally, I believe it is essential for a human to be educated to survive in this world. I feel this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, everybody needs a job to survive in this world. In this case, they have to learn how to prepare for their careers and responsibilities. They may attend some university to augment their capabilities and skills pertaining to their interest. To illustrate, for someone who is interested in studying software engineering, that person has to learn skills that are essential for programming a program. He/she might attend a college or a university to learn those skills, Or might attend a online program offered by the university. After learning, the person is ready for the job, and will be capable enough to take companies responsibilities.
Second, some people might not want to prepare themselves for career, but want to expand their existing knowledge. Hence, they will attend a Master's or a PhD program offered by the college or university. For example, my brother decided to his further studies in USA in order to expand his existing knowledge about his subject interest.
In conclusion, I am opinion of that people should pursue studies in university to get a better life ahead. This is because without having sufficient knowledge about the subject, the person wont get a job, consequently will lead to a rough life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91126166989 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7782766395 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206065862353 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678306644575 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440290862597 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113599187722 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050735470694 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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