To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A society is defined by its culture and traditions as they reflect the most fundamental and innate characteristics of the members of that
society,be it the territorial instinct of animals such as rhinoceros or the killer instinct of aquatic species such as sharks.This is no
exception to human societies as well.A society may adapt and change its functioning owing to the external changes such as industrialization
or massive technological development and may lose its most fundamental characteristics in the process. But the lesser developed areas of the
society remain largely unaffected and thereby preserve the archaic values.
A usual city routine is characterized by rush hours,stress,long commutes,exasperating working hours takiing a toll on people's health
and this can be found in any of the world's cities.These only scratch the surface of the actual characteristic of a society.Whereas , bullicoic
places such as villages offer a more rustic view of the society.The rudimentary lifestyle of the people,their habitats,culture,folklore,etc all
these elements give the actual taste of a society's most important characteristics.This is plausible as even for studying the human
characteristics, historians had to study our ancestors right from apes through neanderthals to homo sapiens.
An apt illustration to support this convection is japan,one of the worlds most technologically advanced countries with innumerable
breakthroughs in domains such as automation,robotics,etc. But its most conspicuous values of cleanliness, love for hygiene, importance of a
happy and contented life are known an praised all over the world. In a way,these rustic values have defined the perception people have about
the country.
Similarly India,a country with an immense love for science, technology,maths ,engineering which is proven by the masses of engineers
it produces every year, is famous and accoladed for its rich culture and traditions which can be found in the remotest corners of the country.
India is founded upon the principles laid down by the highly coveted vedas and upanishads,mythological epics such as the ramayana and
mahabharata.People from all over the world used to come to india to study in universities such as nalanada and takshashila which world known
for their immensely knowledgeable teachers and tradition.Today,all this won't be seen in the mega cities such as Mumbai,Delhi or Bangalore.But
in places such as uttar pradesh and the southern india , these age old values and traditions are still preserved and passed on to the students.
Cities fail to preserve and represent the actual flavour of its characteristicand potray only a superficical sketch of its foundations
It is the remote and lesser developed areas where these values are preserved and cherished as there exists no rat race for a high social status,
globalization and efforts to 'fit in' with the evolving world.Hence , in order to comprehend the most important characteristics of a society,one
must study its rustic areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, still, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6347826087 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89486738283 2.79657885939 139% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.209077363 60.3974514979 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.0 118.986275619 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.1111111111 23.4991977007 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.97078651685 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16738715027 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687469987039 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421814072211 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505874426336 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405929407032 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 14.1392134831 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 48.8420337079 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.1743820225 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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