To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
The issue of whether or not one must study major cities to understand the most important characteristics of a society is a contentious one. While each side has its strength and weakness I believe that one cannot rely alone on big cities to understand complex characteristics of a society. Furthermore, I often feel that in big cities everyone is running in a rat race and nobody has time for things like culture, society and community.
Firstly, major cities become major because of urbanization and industrialization. On one hand these processes does offer more employment opportunity but on the other hand they force us in a rat race where each and everybody is running to earn a decent livelihood for themselves. Amid all of this, people often neglect culture and religion.
Secondly, small cities have a lot to offer if someone needs to understand a society. As in small cities there still exist a culture of having small closely knitted societies where people celebrate festivals together, they care more about each other. In short feeling of fraternity is still there in small cities. I remember I went to ALWAR a small city near JAIPUR with my grandfather and grandmother. I had the biggest shock of my life there. As, even though we live in Delhi we try to follow each and every ritual at our home. Still going to Alwar shocked me so much! I never thought that despite being from the same religious background I would find so many differences in the way rituals are done. In my home usually my mom and grandmother perform rituals as per their convenience in a very boring manner. But in Alwar same rituals were performed ebulliently. Everyone came together and the atmosphere was so exciting.
Lastly, I feel that in big cities there are so many ways of self entertaining that people in big cities prefer to be alone. Specially this earphone culture, it is ruining everything.
Some might argue that a big city due to urbanization and industrialization attracts people to it, creating diversity in the population. This diversity gives a perfect chance to study most important characteristics of the society. Well, it’s true. But the main underlying problem is that people don’t interact much. Neither they have time for it nor are they willing to do it.
In conclusion, big cities to offer diversity in people living there but it is of no use. If one has to know more about societies and culture of a place then nothing can beat small cities. Small cities still holds the essence of culture and religion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not one must study major cities to understa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86574074074 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85497664305 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8626149937 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8461538462 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80769230769 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151610240952 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424609315463 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632804531536 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883245814918 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700814446256 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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