To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Major cities of a country may have lost their cultural and societal characteristics due to modernization. Small cities or provinces may still hold the essential societal characteristics. Moreover, only the major cities cannot underline the characteristics of a diverse society. Hence, I don't agree with the author's claim.
One of India's major city, Mumbai is very different from other cities in terms of its societal characteristics. It is impossible to understand the most important characteristics of a society or a country as diverse as India, merely through the study of its major cities. Each and every city in India will unravel a new societal value. Additionally, it's the kinds of people who define the characteristics of a society. For instance, in an urban city like Bombay LGBTQIA community will find a lot of support and acceptance, but in most Indian towns and cities the community might be subjected to discrimination. Such towns may force humans to conform to the unjust societal norms. The societal characteristics in major cities of India are much varied from those of most of the country.
The people who agree with the author's claim may argue that the major cities are the most developed, and hence can underline the crucial characteristics of the society, but development and urbanization merely evolves a society's characteristics. The question is what percentage of the country is developed, if major part of the country is developed and all cities are similar then studying only the major cities may work. But to form a more cogent and cohesive understanding, one must study from a set that is representative of all the different kinds of cities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...vel a new societal value. Additionally, its the kinds of people who define the char...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ely evolves a societys characteristics. The question is what percentage of the coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24524346498 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3730500471 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446255264058 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145382340113 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111263419586 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290090780322 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880142162575 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eristics of a diverse society. Hence, I dont agree with the authors claim. One o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...vel a new societal value. Additionally, its the kinds of people who define the char...
^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ely evolves a societys characteristics. The question is what percentage of the coun...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24524346498 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3730500471 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446255264058 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145382340113 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111263419586 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290090780322 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880142162575 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.