To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is formed by people having same beliefs. In order to understand important characteristics of society, it is important to study the people that constitute the particular society.
Now a days, majority of people reside in cities due to availability of opportunities, resources and a better lifestyle. Therefore, one can come to a conclusion that focusing on the major cities will provide necessary information for understanding the important aspect of the society.Today the world is advancing and due to advancement in communication & technology, the urbanization is rapidly spreading in under developed countries like India, Africa etc. The major population that is getting affected by urbanization is in the city due to accessibility to all the resources. Hence such major cities are having cosmopolitan population. These people are getting influenced by the cultures and beliefs of other developed countries. Hence, we can say that the people living in the majority cities are following a hybrid culture/beliefs i.e. the one from their native place and one of the developed countries.Therefore, one can get information regarding few characteristics of the society i.e. changing aspects of the society, by focusing on this population
In contrary people residing in the provincial part of any society are less affected by such urbanization. Hence, to understand core culture/ belief it is best to focus on these people. One can understand a core understanding, reasoning and way of life by studying this part of the society. The people in this particular region will follow culture that has been followed by their ancestors and as they have been staying in this area for a long time such beliefs and culture will follow from one generation to another.Therefore, one can get the most authentic information regarding all aspects of society by focusing on this particular part of the society.
Therefore, in order to understand most important characteristic of society it is essential to consider urban as well as pastoral aspects of the society which is possible by focusing on both major cities as well as provincial part of it.
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...ssible by focusing on both major cities as well as provincial part of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33038348083 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34908317775 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445427728614 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.764633564 60.3974514979 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174855312765 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752011602168 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516398525247 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13167985141 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454532347749 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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