To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
While I agree with the statement that the characteristics of a country can be found in its major city, I do have some reservations regarding the counter too. While I do believe that major cities represent what is this country about in aspects of culture, heritage, urbanization, and development of the whole communities, there are certain aspects of the society that can be seen lost somewhere in the major cities and could be only found upon looking at more remote areas.
Major cities have been built in order to create an image that represents the culture or heritage of that place as much as possible. This can be seen in countries like India. For instance, food is a prominent part of India and it can be observed that major cities have indeed lots of them in large quantities and varieties.
Building upon the same example each city tries to represent the enriched culture of that particular state. There is also another aspect of major cities that might help in studying major characteristics which is that they have a diverse population. Post urbanization, people from every part of the country have migrated to such cities and this diversity combines to make a different culture. These cultures have different thinking initially, but at last, it submerges into one, defining prime characteristics of accepted behavior and culture. Singapore is the best example of such a culture. Where people from various parts of Asia have united to be called Singaporeans. People who at last are diversified have a respect for each other's culture and they have figured out how to co-exist. This also says a lot about a culture's characteristics.
While there are parts of cities that are not influenced by their country's culture and characteristics, rather they have adapted from western countries. This has been a common trend among developing countries. Societies of major cities often adapt to western cultures' behavioral attributes. Making the country's own characteristics less unique and banal.
Now the original characteristics of the society can be observed when small towns are also taken into account. This is where western culture has its least influence. For instance, in India major cities have popularly endorsed the concept of nuclear families, while looking at the small towns, it is still believed to stay in a joint family with every member since it is a major characteristic of that society.
While these characteristics differ all across the country, they still are more specific and uninfluenced. To study these characteristics one must weigh what major factors are to be studied, how many a character from other parts of the world, and is there any observable change in the past few years. These will help one define a lot more about society. For instance, Section 377 in India recently approved the support for LGBTQ+ communities but still, the people in India are adapting to that change. While the remote area might be against it for several years, a positive aspect of this adaptation can be seen in major cities. Changing characteristics should also define society's characteristics. Since it will be who they are in several years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... is the best example of such a culture. Where people from various parts of Asia have ...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d also define societys characteristics. Since it will be who they are in several year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2635.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 521.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0575815739 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90053679779 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468330134357 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.0721928342 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5925925926 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2962962963 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2962962963 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145934893161 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440943422822 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408355418266 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867371815732 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215122840591 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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