To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Critical characteristics of any society lie in traditional places. However, it is not uncommon for tourists or even natives to travel to places that positively reflect the culture of their country. The prompt recommends that to study the long-established customs one must explore more about the major cities. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this suggestion and argue that one must look inward rather than outward when researching more about the important characteristics of society for two reasons.
Firstly, all major cities where urbanization and development have taken a faster pace are now converting into major political and technological centers. People all around the world are now traveling to developed countries to begin a quiet and steady life by getting a regular job. For example, every major city like Mumbai in India or Paris in France provides the best amenities and facilities, which attracts more and more people to improve their socioeconomic status. Due to commercialization and the growing need of each city to compete with each other in the race to be the best, they are not capable of capturing the true essence of their society.
Secondly, small towns and rural cities provide a closer look into the cultural heritage. More than 70 percent of the native population lives in those towns. These towns offer the most visible characteristics of a society and the role played by it in history. For example, small towns like Nashik in India still have preserved the stories and relics from the era when gods lived with their ancestors till the second world war. All traditions are still been followed which shows how the ancestors used to live and the festivals are also celebrated with the importance they had in history. To truly understand the society and background, it is necessary to visit the countryside and further explore the cities to learn more about their culture, heritage, and past.
Of course, some argue that the study of the capitals of every country sums up all the features and displays them precisely in museums or art galleries. However, isn't that precisely why we should visit and study more about the rural area? If we do so, we are likely to learn the proper culture, not the one fabricated for everyone's interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...y in museums or art galleries. However, isnt that precisely why we should visit and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75863599261 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557029177719 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6044148576 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182134545657 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542768766367 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037482238762 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10623328811 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487557260837 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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