Inextricably intertwined are several factors need to be analyzed in the light of evidence to understand whether we should focus on, to perceive the major characteristics of a society, major cities or rest of the portions. Whereas the rural people consists the overwhelming majority of the society and tempting to be considered as representative of characteristics of a society, the major cites which are comparatively advanced, solvent and oldest city also bear many vital information. This complexity really gives me food of thought. I believe juxtaposition of these two images can lead us to resolve the apparent contradiction.
Despite it is conspicuously true that outsiders of major cities comprises the overwhelming majority of a society, which should have placed major effects on the significant features of a society, the history tells us that firstly, we focus on the major cities of any society to glean information about them. For instance, if we want to know about the Mughal Empire, our foremost priority would be to shed light on the lifestyle, monarchies, economy of Delhi, Agra , the capital of the country at that time.
Moreover, we need to be cleared at some point what we mean by important characteristics. The most significant features of a society are those which reflects their society; it comprises the economy, education system, rules regulations, lifestyle, philosophy foods, cloths etc. The city dwellers usually lives the high standard lifestyle and also , abreast of that mostly they lead the economy. To put it another way the major cities are the major ruling point of government and business activities grow up around this. The city people consumes the relatively big portion of freedom and most frankly can express their philosophy and opinions.
It is undeniable truth at which we can’t turn our face that outside the rural people comprises the maximum portion, perhaps live different lifestyle consisting of different cultural freedom- which is one of the most compelling arguments against the major city reading priority. A society, undoubtedly, varies from place to place. But we should keep in mind that these variations and characteristics are discrete significant factors but not mostly significant.
All things considered, it seems to me reasonable to think that to know the pros and cons of a society one need to study over whole society including rural areas, minor as well as major cities. But most significant information to perceive a society, could be achieved through analyzing the major cities and so, one should be focused on them if he is on about to know major characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much vital information', 'a good deal of vital information'.
Suggestion: much vital information; a good deal of vital information
...nced, solvent and oldest city also bear many vital information. This complexity really gives me food o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se two images can lead us to resolve the apparent contradiction. Despite it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to resolve the apparent contradiction. Despite it is conspicuously true that ou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tyle, monarchies, economy of Delhi, Agra , the capital of the country at that time...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ves the high standard lifestyle and also , abreast of that mostly they lead the ec...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant factors but not mostly significant. All things considered, it seems to me re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, frankly, if, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26241134752 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05616536084 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7194564631 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.125 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163670608845 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535913643004 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03748950699 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103117302962 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142711737703 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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