Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The modern cognition has indeed involved into thinking that an appealing image is more important than reality or truth. The availability of internet is only empowering this thinking. For several reasons it can be averred that contemporary society is giving the image more importance, than it should get.
To begin with, it has become very important for today's society to have aura of felicity. Walk down any street and you will find many people taking their own photographs in front camera, even in trite situations, while buying vegetables, shopping, or even when taking a brisk walk. All of this only for the sake of their online profile. We surely know where this photos are going to be posted.
In addition, the internet and smart phone applications like Facebook, twitter, Instagram and SnapChat are facilitating this kind of behavior. People have gone more busier than ever in staging their life online, they never realize that with such behavior they are missing the reality, the moment they should be living in. For instance, several accidents and mishaps have been reported on daily basis, while taking "selfies". This is the limit of idiotic behavior.
Moreover, there are several repercussions giving the self image more than required importance. Psychologists have confirmed that positive response from other people to this evanescent self image, releases Dopamine in our body. The chemical known to make us feel better, its effect is same as that of drinking alcohol or smoking cigarette. Because of which people get addicted to this blasphemy and lose the interest in reality. Take for example, most of us have friends who post on SnapChat as if they are having an amazing time, while in reality they might be suffering from intense problems.
However in contrast to the statement, it is important to have a respectable image in society, it drives personality traits like self esteem and satisfaction. People with low self esteem are susceptible to having psychological problems. That is why novel and inspired self appraisal is suggested.
Conclusively, having an image is important for healthy survival in society, but giving into it and living life only to flaunt it in front of others is censured. One shall always remember that the existence in reality is what we actually are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
...this kind of behavior. People have gone more busier than ever in staging their life online,...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... be suffering from intense problems. However in contrast to the statement, it is imp...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17553191489 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76969367134 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571808510638 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5457900108 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172365223402 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471115354891 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562128134388 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913223226034 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531841315835 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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