Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
The statement claims that this kind of appealing image has been become more important than the reality or truth behind that image. In general vision, most people are always see the value of the appealing image such as appearances, and words on the resume. It can be unfortunate that people only on their appearances and people who sees it only judge superficial image. However, the statement surely have their controversial issues that people are dumb or not legible to understand the truth or reality. Recent people who are intelligible in 21 century understand the theory that human being has right to observe and understand the truth and behind the image.
First of all, the reality is not really aggressive as it seems and knowing the reality will show another direction of the future. There are several types of venality around the society, but that doesn’t help with their reputations or authorization; they usually belies the truth and going for another run. Truth is the confrontation of skullduggery, which gives fake information that will hold back the truth. Revealing the truth is very important for this type of aspect so that they can be punished. Knowing more, then getting stronger.
Secondly, truth behind the image is also very important for each aspect. Take for instance, entertainment celebrities are showing their muscular features or glamorous body lines to have more fans; but their effort doesn’t reveal because it is insufferable for people to watch. Audiences are watching the moment of Musical singers singing on the stage, which looks very marvelous and glorious at first, but behind that scene, musical singers are not innate to sing or vocal on the stage; all efforts and endeavors are contrived from enthusiastic musical singer.
Admittedly, creating an appealing image is more and only important than the truth behind that image. For example, scientists are showing eloquent speech from conference to give specific field of study. Other scientists do not care about result of failures, they would look forward to see influential result. However, in that moment of speech, there are also many scientists who want to look at the error analysis and reconsider about the circumstances that researchers did.
In conclusion, appealing image is important for each day and everyday life. However, when people see the truth behind that image such as fur of coat is from sheep or reality, they will getting become more conscious thinker to see circumstances. Therefore, reality and truth behind that image become more important than appealing image.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ecent people who are intelligible in 21 century understand the theory that human being ...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belie'
Suggestion: belie
...utations or authorization; they usually belies the truth and going for another run. Tr...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Knowing more, then getting stronger. Secondly, truth behind the image is also...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...lt of failures, they would look forward to see influential result. However, in that mo...
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Line 7, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the circumstances that researchers did. In conclusion, appealing image is import...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...oat is from sheep or reality, they will getting become more conscious thinker to see ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2278177458 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69860154501 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491606714628 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4195423043 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392372058804 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145231171981 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1927729129 0.0758088955206 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225267056709 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117674751307 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.