"Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment. Society
would be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and trends that will ultimately have the most long-term significance."
In the above topic,the author is stating that the media is focusing more on those ephemereal events which are more popular or controversial,but neglect those events which generally are less sensational but have a long-term significance.Some may support the media by stating that these short term controversial events attract a lot of people which is also why many newspapers' headlines contains those . Others in opposition of this trend may say that it doesn't give the much needed attention to more significant news which leads to unawareness among people. In my view,I also don't support this trend of sacrificing more valuable news for those short time sensational events which have very little or zero value in common man life .
Giving more coverage to events which have more value and can affect others in long term have various advantages . As an example,if more focus is given to the laws or amendments done in Parliament of a country like India ,then people will be aware of what changes are being done ,for whom it is done and how it affects them. A great example of this is Triple Talaw Bill passed in Indian Parliament.This protects the rights of Indian Muslim Women against bad old practices like giving divorceby just saying "Talaq" three times . This not only gives the power to Muslim women to fight back ,but also check these unfortunate events from happening in the first place,making a better society .
Moreover,media has a great role in making these events known and explained to the common people . One great example where media actually gives attention to more valuable news is the various dicussions happening on mandates of different parties in Indian elections.This help the people to know what are the longterm plans of any party . Various opinions are given by experts in concise for each mandate . This helps the voters of India in choosing correct government for them. This actually decides the direction of any country's development and also affects the society too.
Although,one can say that we should not totally avoid these ephemereal sensational events . There are many reasons for this . First,it actually increase the view rate or TRP of any channel because many people get attracted by controversies etc . This increase the popularity and income of that channel which they would prefer . Secondly,sometimes these types of events are a result of something large hidden event or a indication of something big .
In the end,I would state the less popular events having more valuable long term significance should be given enough coverage and should not be sacrifised for short term sensatiional news .It is incumbent of media to make people aware of what is happening and how it is going to affect them . This increase the credibilty of any channel ,thereby giving them much needed views or TRP too .
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actually, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10515021459 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8414809876 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495708154506 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5769230535 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.210526316 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5263157895 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203199639045 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574611246491 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650146409413 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118155752588 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532050301765 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.