Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Some people contend that students need to immerse themselves into their own major to wield knowledge in astute. However, I hold the opposite view that they have to acquire various courses beyond their own fields so as to broaden their knowledge structure to come up with contemporary society.
Admittedly, some voices that oppose mine rise that only taking one kind of courses make sure that everyone would dedicate effort and time into their major courses as much as they can. Therefore, they would be able to be a high-flying person in the future, making those remarkable and tremendous achievements. However, in my opinion, I do not think that when students only own their major courses, they would devote more time than others who do not. How much time and effort students pay is depending on how much interest passion they hold. Clearly, constantly focusing on one field would diminish students' passion, which would backfire their education performance. So, studying other courses irrelevant with their major can be regarded as respite and a way to find back their passion to studying.
In great contrast, interdisciplinary studying is indispensable among most fields, which urges scientists to expand their knowledge structure to a large degree. With the rapid development of technology and progressive theory, many fields are intersecting with each other, like mathematic. It is not surprising that math is a significant implement for physics, construction and even history that seems irrelevant with math. For an example, Einstein, the laureate of Nobel Prize in physics last century, come up with the Relativity Theory that all the scientists specializing in physics regarded as the foundation upon which numerous theories are able to develop. However, the deduction of Relativity Theory is not pure physic equation, while including complicate mathematic knowledge and theory, which indicates that Einstein must be a master of math. In this case, if a student desire to follow the such great man, making the tremendous achievement in the future, they have to delve lots of divergent fields.
Except for the professional researches, the knowledge of different field is required in our life. It is generally acknowledged that the employers are inclined to those graduates who have received interdisciplinary education. For university students, they would be more likely to get the chances to take internship or even to be inducted in a famous corporation as formal employees, due to they have take various courses in the college. To be more specific, a financial student would be refused in applying for a job, if he only gains financial knowledge, in fact, which is saw as the superfluous skills by the company. This because, in order to complete assignment efficiently prior to the deadline, financial workers have to exert some kinds of programing skills. Therefore, for increasing the life standard and defeating other competitors, even though some universities do not offer such courses, they need to study it by themselves.
In a nutshell, I still remain that it is no doubt each student should be urged to have various courses, which would bring benefits to them in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...various courses beyond their own fields so as to broaden their knowledge structure to co...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... How much time and effort students pay is depending on how much interest passion they hold....
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Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...n as formal employees, due to they have take various courses in the college. To be m...
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Line 7, column 574, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
... financial knowledge, in fact, which is saw as the superfluous skills by the compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, while, as for, as to, except for, in fact, kind of, no doubt, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2692.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2373540856 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91145503571 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52140077821 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1934209328 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.19047619 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4761904762 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178198510458 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521854217029 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383661054566 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102385203112 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320413796499 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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