With the development of our world today, it is more and vaguer between the area of every technology field. You may find your fridge can surf the Internet as after discerning the food inside, it can maintain the temperature to keep them fresh by the method storing at the Database in the data-cloud. So it would be necessary for students, the future of the world, to study other courses apart from ones' major. In that, it will offer more than knowledge to them.
To begin with, I will discuss the main purpose of studying at the university where the students study at. Unlike primary school or high school, the students in high-education institute should behave themselves at the study, as it is an open place of learning and researching, nobody wants to you to get a high score unless you want to. Due to the fast-changing outside campus, the student should get more knowledge by themselves to adopt the pace in the society when they graduate. As the responsibilities between both university and students, they need to unite together to catch up with the trend. So the universities should open the door of the classroom for all its students if they want to enter in.
Moreover, Learning various kinds of courses can help students in ones' main course. As I put previously, the research and technology require inter-discipline students eagerly than before. Under this condition, e.g. If a student major in computer science, he may learn some Philosophy and anthropology as a supplement, in order to help him to learn AI or Deep Learning in computer field which is one of the areas pioneering the future of the world. Likewise, the students majoring in English can learn some mechanical engineering as he can make the business through the world after graduation.
Someone, however, may question that is it overload for students if they go to so many classes. I don't worry about this point obviously. Learning is the path for ourselves, the students could maintain the pace of learning by themselves. Some of them graduate early with a bachelor degree, it doesn't matter if he wants to go back to the university for further study several years later after work.
In conclusion, I agree that the universities should let the students learn various kind of courses besides ones' major.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89350649351 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77450859255 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553246753247 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2548148618 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207782466175 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667071354294 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467972018008 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118338831043 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519798653624 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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