Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Society today requires students who have matriculated from their university to be well rounded as well as an expert in a field of study. However, if students only focus on courses within their major, they will not enter the work place with the fundamental skills needed to excell. Students should be required to take a core group of general education classes along with the courses within their intended field of study.
Most jobs these days require a basic knowledge of the fundamentals in other fields of study. For example, a marketing professional can not fully exact their knowledge of advertising if they do not understand the basic tennants of economics. Understanding how to target and sell to certain groups requires a knowledge of how money and society work together. If a marketer can grasp when a product is in demand seasonally, they can more effectively place their ads throughout the year to achieve the highest amount of sales. Additionally, if you seek to become a marketing professional, you need to have an understanding of current events. Current events contextualize the world we live in, which is essential knowledge to an advertiser. Understanding history will factors deeply into how these current events are being received by society. For example, if an advertising professional understands how recent elections affected the country's zeitgeist he/she could make the decision not to market a certain product during that election because of product association with a particular candidate. A marketing professional who has had some university course work in economics and history will see more success in their advertising campaigns and therefore enjoy a more fruitful career.
Taking a core group of general education studies often proves to be a neccessary compliment to one's main course of study. Consider the rigors of a curriculum in medicine. While doctors have to complete some of the most intense and arduous courses of study, if they do not take humanities, their expertise about the human body can not be applied. Doctors, like the marketing professional, should be able to grasp human feeling and emotions in order to excell in their fields. A doctor who has taken a sociology and psycology courses will grasp a better understanding of humanity by knowing how human beings react to various situations. Often doctors have to deliver tough news to their patients. Knowing how to deliver this news with tact and grace can be the difference between a pateient following the suggested course of treatment or accepting the defeat of their diagnosis. A doctor with a training in the humanities will be better suited to delivering news in delicate situations.
It can be said that taking courses that are extracurricular to a main course of study will cause a student to waste extra time while in university. This extra time in universtiy means extra tuition as well as all of the other associated costs of being a student (room and board, etc.). However, general education courses provide the complimentary tools needed to support an expert understanding of a particular field. Graduating students who complete a core group of general education classes are best suited to enter the work place and pursue rewarding carreers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'factor'
Suggestion: factor
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...iverstiy means extra tuition as well as all of the other associated costs of being a stude...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...s of being a student room and board, etc.. However, general education courses prov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2729.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15879017013 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9166753408 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470699432892 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 863.1 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5654604209 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.708333333 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150407348795 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469152701834 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456412200316 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107196182515 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516061287312 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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