"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
According to the speaker, multimedia like video camera can provide fact and documents precisely and accurately in a persuasive form compared to information are written by individuals. I personally agree that this form of documentation would be accurate and trustworthy, however, these have some disadvantages when people want to consider emotional aspect beside physical one. In fact, viewer has a limit access to interpret emotional aspect derived by being in the middle of the scene.
The most common form of documentation an event and observation, video camera can be useful and lucrative when observer requires seeing one event or situation again and again. By this record, he can find and assess his examination in precise way. For example, imagine a scholar who wants to observe a group of botany for three times. This action will not come to be useful unless he can observe it several times. By this frequency of observing, he will be able to estimate some factor and conclusion for his examination. In this research, he can pause his video and repeat it again to assess it truly. In fact, this researcher can eliminate various factor limited by real observation. Such a practice and requirement of examination indicates that this way of recording data will be lucrative for great deal of scholar.
Video camera can also be useful for memorizing some ceremony, including birthday party, wedding, and graduating party for two main reasons. First of all, it provides complete scene in one frame through which we can evaluate and memorize our past clearly. Having some videos of ceremony, people would remember all the details of their ceremony easily. In fact, this format owing to being created in a three dimensional format can provide any aspect of the event like where it had been hold, how many people had participated in it, which people eat which thing , and can provide information will be need later. However, in written format you should consider some aspects and record some information without considering all aspects in one frame. Indeed, video camera is all in one.
Aside from the foregoing two provisos, video camera only might create physical aspect, instead written format shows emotional aspects derived only by human who saw it in the past. Moreover, some information requires some explanation to be defined clearly like law document. In fact, law document requires various point of views and interpretation to be substantionable and inferable to be used by people. Hardly ever, can we see nation who derived and judged his citizen just by one frame like camera video. Yet people may have not fair job due to being interpreted by one person or court. Otherwise, these rules require to be evaluated by many aspects and dimension. Thus, some situations and information would be better to derive in a written format than to infer just by physical aspects.
In sum, unless some situations which need some people to infer and interpret some situation and fact, video camera would be completely lucrative way owing to being precisely and persuasively. And this multimedia format can be beneficial in the future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in fact', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238178633975 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.164623467601 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0665499124343 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577933450088 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0367775831874 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103327495622 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0560420315236 0.0406280797675 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73901526924 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031523642732 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0753064798599 0.0997080785238 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0402802101576 0.0249443105267 161% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192644483363 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3144.0 2732.02544248 115% => OK
No of words: 516.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09302325581 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381782945736 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263565891473 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18992248062 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131782945736 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73901526924 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 219.290929204 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.6079949436 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8461538462 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.423615681 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 46.2027429934 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.53378378378 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21233960779 0.391690518653 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105074299888 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.078456596733 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475766562751 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125562842991 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779605663703 0.161403998019 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503268074044 0.0892212321368 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351166263766 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0289599398868 0.0692045440612 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145524506042 0.275328986314 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435947637022 0.0653680567796 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.