As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Although the more information have caused that human achieves more skills and instructions, those knowledge is going to make the world more complex and complicated. While knowing more on the universe, human pays more attention to the details which make his far from the comprehensive thoughts. Furthermore, in the modern time, with having access to the professional skill and information, people are trying to use their specialty in creating new and complex things.
First of all, more people gain information, more they certainly notice the details on their own making which cause that world becomes more complex. For example, in the university, with reaching more findings about the designing and landscape, I, as landscape architecture, am trying to design the specific spaces in the environment. I want to use all of my knowledge which I have gained during all years of the education in my draws and work. Thus, with more knowledge on the nature, environment, architectural concepts, and other relevant subjects, I create more complex spaces which are hard to discern for all population.
Second, as we can realize clearly, the modern world is going to be more mysterious with reaching people to the particular and unique achievements. In this time, people with technology have able to create the world more odd and complicated. For example, with computers and lots of other technological systems, fishy things have being made so that everybody cannot understand them at first time of dealing.
However, in some fields and cases of study, it is quite convers and it is going to be obvious that people should have a comprehensive view toward the nature, and the surrounding world. For example, in environmental investigation, researchers try to use some total and congruent instructions and principles in their empirical works. Thus, in those studies, the most knowledgeable one tries to use the comprehensive and strong view in all positions for preventing from separating the harmonic cycles of the universe.
Finally, our detailed information has caused that we create our world more strange and specific, although in some field, scientist have reached that it is the time of seeing the world quite coordinated and understandable.
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It is appropriately said…
It is appropriately said that the more knowledge we acquire, the more things becomes complex and mysterious because acquiring more knowledge exposes some hidden things to us which we have no knowledge about before. When we acquired more knowledge, it broaden our knowledge and it make us to be eager to know more from which things get complex and mysterious because we will be eager to know what we are not expected to know. Due to this, we expose ourself to some mysterious and dangerous things so that will can find more reasons for the existence of it.
It is rightly said that the more you read, the more you know, the more we acquired knowledge, the more we will be eager to know more because it will make us to be relevant in any community we find ourself. When we acquired more knowledge, we will be aware of the information going on in our community and this might be complex and mysterious atimes because we will always like to be conversant with everything around us.
Furthermore,things get more complex and mysterous as we acquire more knowledge because once will have access to an information, we will always like to find more about it as a result to acquire more knowledge and this might be so complex and mysterous because some information disseminated are so dangerous which when we try to find out more about it might result into negative impact on us.
Apart fro that, we can see that the world is developing day by day and this development make people to acquire more knowledge so as to be relevant which might be complex and mysterous because the desire to know more can make people to go to a level which can endanger their lives. The desire to know more might be disaterous as the motive can propel them to do things that are of bad character.
In conclusion, it is of paramont to acquire more knowledge so as to be relevant in our community but it must not be to the detriment of involving in bad character.
more people gain information, more they certainly notice the details on their own making
the more people gain information, the more they certainly notice the details on their own making
people with technology have able to create
people with technology are able to create
scientist have reached that it is the time
scientists have reached the conclusion that it is the time
Sentence: While knowing more on the universe, human pays more attention to the details which make his far from the comprehensive thoughts.
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Sentence: First of all, more people gain information, more they certainly notice the details on their own making which cause that world becomes more complex.
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fishy things have being made so that
fishy things are being made so that
Sentence: However, in some fields and cases of study, it is quite convers and it is going to be obvious that people should have a comprehensive view toward the nature, and the surrounding world.
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