"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose
views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."
Everyone is characterised by his own views and belifs. Obviously people who disagree with our views are not in our "favourite people's list". claim states that we can usually learn much from people whose views we share than from whose views contradict our own. I disagree with the claim. I partially agree with a reason mentioned that disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning but we should change our view to learn from disagreement.
Society is made of people from different groups. These groups are defined on the basis of some views, belifs and opinions. A person belonging to group is follower of that view and a person belonging to other group which ofcource contradict to his view can be his rival. we have seen many riots happened because they could not accept disagreement of their view. if people try to understand others views and not make rivals of other people who do not follow their view will help to build a better society.
if I am contradicting with a person whose views are against my views. The best way to handle disagreement is to listen to the other person. Debating on points from both the sides will make each other to understand respective views. For example, if I belive that university should introduce elective subjects in first year of course rather than in last year. but my friend thinks that it is good that elective subject introduced in last year of course. I explain my point saying it will help student to design his own syllabus, an therefore it will make a course more interesting to study. he explains that a student in first year have less knowledge of course so might fail to choose a subject which is good for the subjects in next year. By this way, I understand my friends view and I try to think on that. I can understand the point he mentioned is an important to think. but I can argue more if I am not convieneced.
The reason given in support for claim says disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. we will not be stressfull if we try to accept the people's disagreement on our views, understand their views and try to convience with our reasons. also, if we are convinced then there is no reason to be stressed on other's opinion and also it will not affect on our learning.
To conclude I will say if people change their perspective to accept the disagreement of their opponants and understand them logically, it will help us to convince them by explaing how their views are not supported with strong reasons. also, if accepted a disagreement, it will help to be stress free and will not affect our learning.
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- CLAIM: The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in today’s times.REASON: Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study. 50
- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. 50
- "We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning." 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68490153173 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66757107433 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431072210066 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9717422389 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.64 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336231807759 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100434307473 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114811906972 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207674690272 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143209311247 0.0667264976115 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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