We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Author claims that we can learn much from the people with the same point of views.Moreover when our views contradicts with the people then these disagreement issues can cause stress and hinder our learning process. But I am not agree with the claimed issues. Human nature is to stay in a comfort zone where their point of views are similar with others but from the similar points of view they can not learn new thing and can not develop the boundaries of knowledge. Also it is true that disagreement can cause stress. However if they can handle the stress appropriately then it can not hinder learning process.
At initial state, novice employee face huge disagreements from their experienced seniors and feels too much pressure in working. But gradually they improve their skills with the direction by experienced seniors and achieve success with the glorification of the companies.
As example,in an engineering firm people hired with inexperienced in skills need to invest huge amount of efforts in initial state.They feel huge pressure from the seniors to work appropriately.However after few weeks they became familiar with the working process and develop their skills.Gradually they achieve success.
Additionally,in global company,disagreements can cause in official meeting.But compassion and respect to each other can solve those issues.As example,Every international company has annual board meeting.Here employees of different countries attend the meeting and these people have different point of views.However disagreement is caused and raising different issues.But if we have compassion and respect to each other then we can solve every issues.
Furthermore,as example in material research area different results are gained from same material.Sometimes the results from second analyzer found more deviated from previous results.Moreover these contradictions can help us to know the characteristics properties of the material and it enhances our boundaries of knowledge.
Finally,we can come to the conclusion from the above discussions is at initial level inexperienced employees face huge disagreements stress from the senior boss but gradually they overcome it and achieve success.On the other hand in global companies annual meeting people face contradiction with different point of views and with the compassion,respect to each other can solve those issues.And also in research material researcher gained huge deviated results which contradicts previous results but contradiction open a new door to a research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70078740157 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38577183621 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485564304462 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.215627624 60.3974514979 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.454545455 118.986275619 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6363636364 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328773534026 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145756497187 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115008922734 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162912339271 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114419821667 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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