To gain Knowledge there are several different thing, such as reading book, collecting supportive information from social media. I partially disagree with given statement suggest we learn through direct experience, to accept a theory without experiencing it is to learn nothing. Theory and experience are of two different thing exactly say that theory and practical.
Firstly, let consider that it's all where not possible to take an experience an theory, you may assume or put some data so that theory may consider. Take example of theory of Einstein shows an expression E=MC^2. at this time if you thing to prove such experiment or experience a theory it's not possible to prove or experience scientifically this expression, instead use as it is theory, solve required given problem.
Rather, applying theory in actual it's time consuming process instead with extra feature device you may have detailed information regarding any theory with an supportive examples.
In opposite way, in primary learning stage student experience. they may have small group project exhibition which introduce the student knowledge. Student also exhibit many practical phenomenon. Let us take example of student learn theory about magnet, if he introduce an project shows the theory that south - south pole get distract and oppositely north - south pole may attracted towards. so that student knowledge enhance. Now day's teacher also explain any theory with innovative ideas and small projects so that student learn easily.
It's not only about study, rather it's daily activity to experience an new thing. In a life you may face daily new challenge, this is ability of individual one's to tackle the situation, but whats ever result you got you may experience instead of what theory you hear or accept from previous one.
To sum up with all, there are thing you may decide where to apply directly theory and where to experience, its individual choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
To gain Knowledge there are several different thing, such as reading book, collecting...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...n Knowledge there are several different thing, such as reading book, collecting suppo...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'thing' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'things'.
Suggestion: things
...ory and experience are of two different thing exactly say that theory and practical. ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...here not possible to take an experience an theory, you may assume or put some data...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...of Einstein shows an expression E=MC^2. at this time if you thing to prove such ex...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
... expression E=MC^2. at this time if you thing to prove such experiment or experience ...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required given" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'given' or 'to be given'.
Suggestion: given; to be given
...ead use as it is theory, solve required given problem. Rather, applying theory in...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d information regarding any theory with an supportive examples. In opposite way...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'example'?
Suggestion: example
...regarding any theory with an supportive examples. In opposite way, in primary learnin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...mary learning stage student experience. they may have small group project exhibition...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'introduces'.
Suggestion: introduces
...tudent learn theory about magnet, if he introduce an project shows the theory that south ...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rn theory about magnet, if he introduce an project shows the theory that south - s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...rth - south pole may attracted towards. so that student knowledge enhance. Now day...
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Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rth - south pole may attracted towards. so that student knowledge enhance. Now days tea...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... so that student knowledge enhance. Now days teacher also explain any theory with in...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rather its daily activity to experience an new thing. In a life you may face daily...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...idual ones to tackle the situation, but whats ever result you got you may experience ...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...s one. To sum up with all, there are thing you may decide where to apply directly ...
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Line 11, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to experience, its individual choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27419354839 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66666474051 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9332400613 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304764309877 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973750321355 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907497897036 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159915873181 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056712197 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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