The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authorities. do you agree or disagree?
Society can be broadly be divided into two strata – people in power and the ordinary multitude. The general public elects their representatives to formulate laws for a better well off living, and hence, it becomes the fundamental right of the people to question the authorities and be heard and answered.
The government is an intricate, multi-layered highly functioning complex body whose fundamental duty is to cater to the well-being of the society at large. however, the government often fails to notice issues which might not be as much important in its functioning as it is to the society. it is at this juncture where the interests of the people in authority supersedes that of the society. without the proper instruments of asking questions and channeling doubts to the authority, what follows are protests, vandalism and destruction of state property, as seen when government tries to hide figures during inflation, economic depressions, natural calamity or world-wide pressing phenomenon. hence, with proper questioning, both parties can mitigate pressing problems and enhance mutual well-being.
The society will benefit at large when people question the political machinery – the efficient voting system, what changes the current ruling party are aiming at, fund allocations for a new financial year, changes in tax structures and the market economy, trade relations and ties between different countries, how effective the defence systems are or whether the nation is prepared for an impending nuclear strike. Undoubtedly, people will develop a sense of security and trust on the current government if their questions hinted at the legal system –whether justice is imparted equally to all and the efficiency of implementation of human rights, are effectively answered. The consistent pressurization by the people has led to the formulation of right to Information (RTI) act, or the setting up of consumer forum associations. questions regarding the safety of women, having been around for several decades, have stirred up the government to pass the woman rights bill. thus, people stand to benefit when they question authority.
No government can function without the support of the people, and hence, the common mass join the most important criterion of any governance, and answering questions and grievances form the fundamental duty of the authority. often there are issues to which the public should not be aiming questions at, as it would violate the efficient running of a nation. however, society stands to gain when people actively participate in issues such embracing education policies, or technological progress and art after they question the prevailing education system, the advancements in technology and science, the government’s contribution to art and culture, and effectiveness of the allocation of funds to various domains. In India, questioning the authority about the inefficient mid-day meal quality in various schools have been answered by efficient allocation of funds to the states and better regulation of food quality. active participation of people, thus, is deemed necessary for a well-off life.
The advantages of questioning the authority are manifold. people will have clearer views of the political functioning and the legal and social activities of the government. A greater understanding will enhance greater participation of the people in concord the government. this will help people to direct their grievances against certain unsatisfactory practises or suggest changes to already incorporated laws. suggestions and opinions from the common people will help the authorities to cater to the interest of the society in a better way. Moreover, there are possibilities of newer outcomes and ideas from people which the government can embrace. questions can be raised against inefficient practices, corruptions and scandals which often plague the governance, and efficient solutions and actions can be sought.
Hence, indubitably the society stands to help when questions are raised. For a betterment of the people at
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: Without
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Suggestion: Hence
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Suggestion: Questions
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Suggestion: Often
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Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: Questions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 12.9106741573 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3480.0 2235.4752809 156% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.568 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.074076798 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4976 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1065.6 704.065955056 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2507842229 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0384615385 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25372690468 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076896766055 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411859046561 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156502554864 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294088031133 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 176.0 100.480337079 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.