Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Fame and recognition is a phenomenon that attracts the young culture, mostly motivated by an exentric and luxurious life or by the amount of people that sorrounds them providing a life style few of us in this world may get to experience. The prompt suggests that young population must be instructed in following long-term goals instead of immediate fame. In my opinion, I somewhat agree with the prompt for the next reasons.
To begin, young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term goals, but It could be the case that a persons's dream is to obtain fame and recognition, in this case the prompt should also apply and this young person should be instructed to follow a plan, which includes short, medium and long term goals. When someone is talented in some areas such as arts or music where mostly famous icons are discovered at a young age, they must even follow the prompt recommendation. For example, a young person that gets immediate fame could get to experience a lack of knowledge on what to do next or on how to retain this fame, leading to a feeling of discomfort when something as appreciated as fame is lost.
On the other hand, someone may say that if a young one does not persue immediate fame, it wont be possible for them to get anywhere close to their dreams. However, this clausule should not go in opposition with my point of view where young ones should be instructed to follow an intelligent planned life with goals based on time ranges. Concluding, fame and recognition should be immediately pursued but, also persued in medium and long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a young person that gets immediate fame could get to experience a lack of knowle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73090909091 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62625019422 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7744160549 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.555555556 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28565351367 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129032625113 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724394546038 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207899874555 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018163325559 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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