Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to do jobs that were previously done by humans The benefits far out weight the disadvantages To what extend do you agree or disagree

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Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to do jobs that were previously done by humans. The benefits far out weight the disadvantages.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to do jobs that were previously done by humans. The benefits far out weight the disadvantages.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?

We live in the world of fast-paced development, where each day new and more advanced inventions are being created. Despite the fact that these advances sometimes have negative impact on people’s lives, I totally agree that they make our survival much easier.

Up to a point, let’s firstly think about the advantages of new inventions. The first thing that came up to our mind is of course, that it makes our life easier. Our ancestors previously used to walk to their friend’s homes, just to speak or congratulate on some event. But now people are able to drive cars instead of walking on long distances and call via telephone to know what’s going on. Secondly, modern technologies save huge amount of time and person’s energy. Just think of vacuum cleaners, washing machines! Definitely, without these inventions women would clean and wash whole day. Advances in technology are also very helpful in banks. For example, some kind of machines is being used in order to count huge amounts of cash. Of course, using these machines is very essential in terms of not making mistakes.

And yet, using new advances technologies sometimes can cause several negative effects. People use them in their everyday life: to prepare food, to move, to clean, etc. This makes them to be less active during whole day. So that as a result, in the most cases people suffer from obesity. Isn’t it shocking that such a small things like technologies can cause so huge disorders?!

To sum up, I believe that despite all the drawbacks of advanced technologies, people will use these inventions everyday and everywhere.

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