The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The bar chart illustrates the outcomes of the research by human department at a big company in order to define employees’ attitude to various effects on their work performance dividing them into two groups: workers at the age of 18-30 and 45-60.
First of all, according to the given information those age groups have both similar and different views about mentioned factors. Although over 80% of young workers’ group think personal development chance, relaxed work environment and promotion prospects are very impressive points, only 30 to 50% of older group consider them effective. Additio...
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