Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Majority people think that becoming popular is a dream since they were children. Turning into a superstar arise effects both to individual and social life. Personally, I partially agree that the consequences are more advantages. However, drawback impacts may occur too.
It is undeniable that several good points are achieved on account of being a renowned individual. Firstly, money is an easy thing to gain. Audiences can see a singer who simply performs on television for a few minutes earns much money. It is unfair if it compares with a teacher must teach students, and she or he is paid less. Moreover, a career of public figure in the future will be bright. According to Kompas, the biggest newspaper in Indonesia, said that many actresses work in comfortable positions, such as parliament members, mayors or a governor. They sit on that occupation caused by their popularity. The last, straightforward activities in daily life are obtained. For example, a man change into a celebrated actor. It seems his life is convenient. Everybody respects to him. He deserves first class services in society.
On the other hand, lack of privacy emerges because fans disturb personal life of famous people. They might not visit markets or mall handily. A large number of admirers chase them everywhere they move. Then disruptions of journalists collecting news for an infotainment program regularly appear. Reporters attempt to embrace their targets who are legendary actress. They open an up-to-date gossip like a scandal story among them to viewers. Furthermore , the movie stars who have children are going worry because their son or daughter is a nice target for kidnapping. The kidnappers demand a million dollars to release their hostage.
In conclusion, changing life as a celebrity, in my opinion delivers some good points. Nonetheless, negative effects should be accounted.
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