Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems ?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from y

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ents and live a lavish lifestyle, which wouldnt have been possible without devoting con...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ople. For example, Russel brand, who is a English comedian, actor and activist, h...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'motivation'?
Suggestion: motivation
...red people and of course being a direct motivations for teenagers. Therefore, the benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, in addition, no doubt, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2533632287 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84341091333 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 176.041082164 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652466367713 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 4.0 0.384769539078 1040% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6508801276 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.15 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164592136142 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424370186374 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568041883376 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942347741772 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081908419356 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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