The chart and table show the number fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980, and 2000, and the world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, an maka any relevant comparisons.
This essay will report an illustrated given by a bar chart and a table about fishing statistics in distinct regions in the world from 1970 to 2000.
It is showed that Asia topped the statistics as the region which had the most abundant fishers within the decades. Impressingly, it reached 24 million in 2000. In the second place, Africa started with 1,3 millions of fishers in 1970, then rose to 2 million in 1980 and remained steady until 2000. Uniquely, the number of fishers in South America remained stable by 1,3 million during the decades. On the other hand, North America started low by mere...
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