The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows data about the global sale of hybrid modes, ranging 2006 to over 2009. These was comparing sale of hybrid modes in three countries; Japan, USA and other.
In 2006, a number of sales reached a dramatically increased which was USA about 250,000. USA got the highest of total sales that Japan and other. USA sat a peaked at 350,000 in 2007 and the sale total of hybrid means in Japan reached just under 60,000, it was equal condition with total sale in other areas which were approximately 80,000. As a result, in 2007 each country got a dramatically rose of hybrid vehicles’ sale and USA became the potential country where total sale was the highest than other countries.
Next year, in the 2008 between Japan and other reached a sharply increased, but total sale of hybrid modes decreased and sat at 325,000. A number of sales in Japan reached a sharply increased just under 350,000, but total sale decreased in USA. As a result, from 2008 to 2009 Japan reached a peaked at 325,000 and the result shows that the total sale in Japan year-by-year increased. However, it was opposite condition with a number of sale in USA where from 2007 to 2009 got a dramatically fell.
In conclusion, according to graphic obtains a result that from 2006 to 2009 a number of sales increased. Those were 360,000 in 2006 and 740,000 in 2009. USA became potential country where inhabitants preferred to by hybrid vehicles, although total sale in USA year-by-year increased. However, USA got the highest total sale than other countries.
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a number of sales reached a dramatically increased which was USA about 250,000.
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USA got the highest of total sales that Japan and other.
USA got the highest of total sales than Japan and other.
Sentence: In conclusion, according to graphic obtains a result that from 2006 to 2009 a number of sales increased.
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Words: 265 200
No. of Characters: 1234 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
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