The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The chart informs the number of honey-bee colonies in the United State from 1970 to 2010 and how much United Stated produced honey-bee during these periods. It can be clearly seen that the number of honey-bee colonies generally dropped from 1970 to 2010, but gradually rose in 1980.
The number of honey-bee colonies stood at 4000.000 in 1970 and was climbed about 200.000 honeybees in 1980. However, after ten years next to 2010, the number of it was slumped. There were about 3500.000 in 1990, 2500.000 in 2000 and fell 700.000 in 2010. During the same period, production of honey-bee also tends to drop in every year and it was sharply dropped in 1980. An increase only rose in 1990, at about 120.000.
Honey’s production of American bee stood at 130.000 in 1970, and was felt 20.000 honeys in 1980. However, after declining in ten years before, in 1990, American produced more honey-bee, at 120.000, although in year 2000 to 2010 it was always dropped on average 105.000 and below 70.000.
In short, the more decreasing the number of honey bee colonies, the more honey production of America declined. However, it was conversely in 1980, the increasing that number caused the declining production of it. It might due to the fact that there is no enough capital to make honey from those many bees or the problem of global crisis in America also can influence on the production of the honey-bee.
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It might due to the fact that there is no enough capital to make honey from those many bees or the problem of global crisis in America also can influence on the production of the honey-bee.
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