The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
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The given graph illustrate the changes in the popularity of the fast food conception in a period of twenty years from 1970 and the percentage of expenditure for fast food for three categories of people according to their income, high, average and low for pizza, hamburger, and fish and chips in UK, 1990.
Overall, the high and average income people spend their higher percentage of fast food expense for hamburger, whereas, the low income people prefer fish and chips. The popularity of hamburger and fish and chips are continuously increased, while demand of pizza reduced throughout the years ...
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Sentence: The given graph illustrate the changes in the popularity of the fast food conception in a period of twenty years from 1970 and the percentage of expenditure for fast food for three categories of people according to their income, high, average and low for pizza, hamburger, and fish and chips in UK, 1990.
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