The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The given bar chart offers a glimpse of the influence of age and gender over heart attack in the US.
One dominant figure is that the category of 65+ has the highest number of people who suffer from heart attacks, hovering around 800,000. In contrast, the proportion of men and women with heart attacks in 29-44 group is lowest at about 120,000. Also noteworthy is the fact that men suffering heart attacks outnumber women in the ratio of two to one.
It is clear from the data given that people are prone to heart attack when they grow older; however, men are more likely to be the victims.
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- The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words 63
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
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