The chart shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989 Summerise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wher

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The chart shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Summerise the information bu selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.

The chart demostrates differences with per cent mediocre house prices in various 5 cities from 1990 till 2002 and from 1996 until 2002.

There wasn't percentage change distinction between Madrid and Frankfurt in 1990-1995, however, house prices in both cities increased roughly 3 per cent. Though house prices in London and Tokyo decreased equally, approximately 7 per cent at that time. Despite that only 5 per cent fall was emphasized by statistic in New York. Thus the highest house prices change variety was between Frankdurt and London, nearly 10 per cent.

Though house prices fell in 1990-1995 in London, in spite of more than 10 per cent rise was expressed by survey in 1996-2002. Statistic about stayed almost stable in 1996-2002. House prices in Madrid and New York increased presumably 5 per cent, nevertheless prices fell 3 per cent less than in 1990-1995 in Tokyo.

In conclusion, the chart stated variety between house in 5 big cities, estimated how it changed during years.

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Sentence: The chart demostrates differences with per cent mediocre house prices in various 5 cities from 1990 till 2002 and from 1996 untill 2002.
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Sentence: There wasn't percentage change distinction between Madrid and Frankfurt in 1990-1995, however, hpuse prices in both cities increased roughly 3 per cent. Though house prices in London and Tokyo decreased equally, approximetly 7 per cent at that time.
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Sentence: Despite that only 5 per cent fall was emphasised by statistic in New York.
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Sentence: Though house prices fell in 1990-1995 in London, in spite of more tham 10 per cent rise was expressed by survey in 1996-2002.
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Sentence: House prices in Madrid and New York increased presumably 5 per cent, nevertheless prices fell 3 per cent less tham in 1990-1995 in Tokyo.
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