The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The chars demonstrate information about the number of zebras and buffalos and amount of rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve between 2005 and 2011.

Overall, the number of animals was nearly increased each year. Nevertheless, the amount of rainfall rose and felt each 2-year period.

In 2005, there were more zebras than buffalos with 50 zebras and 40 buffalos. The population of buffalos rose sharply at approximately 40-45 buffalos each 2-year period, and it reached the highest of buffalo colonies at 120 in 2011. However, over the next 6 years the number of zebras was less than buffalos, and these were a slight fluctuation between 2005 and 2011. There were around 85 zebras in 2011.

During the same period, there were 650 millimeters of rain in 2005. The Nboro Nature Reserve had less rainfall in 2005 and 2009, which was less than 800 millimeters. However, it had much more rainfall, in both 2007 and 2011 at average 1100 to 1200 millimeters.

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