The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
There are two charts showing the result of a survey of adult education. The bar chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. The two charts will be analyzed in more detailed in the following sections.
People decide to study due to a variety of reasons. According to the bar chart, most adults choose to study because they are interested in subject, which constitutes of 40 percent in the chart. Because the job market is becoming more competitive, people tend to keep improving their knowledge and skills in...
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Sentence: Because the job market is becoming more competitive, people tend to keep improving their knowledge and skills in order to improve their employability.
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Sentence: On the other hand, 35 percent of people think that the costs should be shared by employers as most education for adults is job-relevant.
Error: job-relevant Suggestion: job relevant
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 243 250
No. of Characters: 1189 1200
No. of Different Words: 124 120
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.948 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.893 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.64 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.978 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.133 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4