Children’s lives in the past had many differences in daily activities compare with children’s live nowadays. Absolutely, there were advantages and disadvantages of children’s experiences that were difficult to find in the present day
In the past, computer, TV or mobile phone was the expensive device, only a few children who had those goods. The information and knowledge were very limited and just obtained from book, radio or at school. As a result, children had lots of free time that they used to spend time outside home by playing with others who lived around their home. From this fact, they could build warm social relationship among them.
On other side, school in the past did not really force students to totally pay attention on the subject and there was no strict competition to get successful at school. Furthermore, children also really enjoyed some dangerous activities such as swimming, climbing, tracking, running, and hunting that were taken in the rivers, large trees, mountain, friendly jungle, fields and farms. As a result, children had outstanding environment dexterities.
Different than children nowadays in which parents send children to school, long time ago children were more independent by taking a walk to school together, so it created the situation more friendly and unforgettable moment on schooldays. In this era, children have lots of extracurricular activities after school, but in the past children just stayed at home and got excellent link with each member of family.
To sum up, the situation in the past and nowadays is extremely different from children’s experience life. Obviously, children’s live had advantages and disadvantages for them in the last.
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