computer is being proved useful for humans. other think it is harmful. which view do you agree or disagree?
computer is need of hour. applications of computer are mushrooming day by day.some proportion of masses assert that computer is lucrative for human being. while other having conflicting view. here i m personally inclined to the former statement
To begin with, computer having a great deal of knowledge. one can get a great amenities for searching.which further upgrade the thinking level of one's. one can improve his general knowledge for elegant impression in every field. further more, computer is a great indispensable tool. one can chat thousands of miles away and it gives amenities to communicate with relative. which bridge the gap of the countries and their culture and people as well.
Hence more, computer is proving a boom for education. If one's want to get corresponding study, then computer is proving a good educational tool for him. one can send his assignments, projects, documents and paper or exam as well with a most satisfactory and friendly way. what can i say more, computer is lucrative way of amusement. one can listen music, watch movies at their free time.
By contrast, some people ponder that it has darker side too. the over use of computer offers several deceases such as vision problem, balance problem, back bone problem, hearing problem as well. Moreover, computer invent the cyber crime at the very epidemic stage. which is the major problem of the universe. Next, over use of computer is wastage of time and money as well. it is perilous for one's precious time.
In a nut shell, computer is precious gift from the science to human being. without it our life become so tedious. now a days it is widely used by growing up and grown. so one should use computer up to a very useful and a nice manner.
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