Computers are not necessarily the best way for children to learn In many areas of education a teacher can be more effective in helping pupils to gain new skills and knowledge To what extent do you agree or disagree with this point of view

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Computers are not necessarily the best way for children to learn. In many areas of education a teacher can be more effective in helping pupils to gain new skills and knowledge.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

The invention of the internet and computer really change a lot of human behavior. For instance, the way they study. In the past, the students learned face to face with the teachers in the class.Recently, the old habits were slowly change as the consequence computer and internet inventions.The computers, with the help of the internet, slowly take teacher’s places.Such condition raised debate between people whether the computers are the best way or not to help students to learn.

People who disagree with computer’s help to argue that things making students upgraded from lower to higher level are the feedbacks from the teachers.With the feedbacks students know wahat things they need to improve.Yet, in my opinion the feedbacks-giving would be more efficient with the help of computer.Teachers can post a test on the web to know their students ability and send the feedback via social media group or video call.

Moreover, with computers, student can learn with their own study plan.It is an advantage for the students, because each student has different background.Some of them may have to work part-time to support their family finance.Too, the fact that students speed to loarn a new material is different each other .With computers teachers can be more focus to students that learn slow.Last, with computers and internets, students with poor economical background and do not have enough funds to go to school or university can learn independently as the most of the materials being used in educational institutions are now available in the internet.

To summarize, computers are really great tools for students to assist their study as they make learning more efficient

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People who disagree with computer’s help to argue that...
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to loarn a new material is different each other .
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