In countries like Japan, the population is getting older, are the effects of aging population on society is negative or positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is said that experience is a virtue. Majority of working people are getting older in countries such as Japan, which has provided them with some benefits. However, I believe that there is a flip side to this situation which outweighs the positives.
It’s true that older people makes for more stable and mature workers. With growing age, people become more stable and tend to stick to one company, thus reducing rework involved in training new employees every few years. With more industry experience behind them, they tend to make more informed decisions and hence reduce operational risks. Al...
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