Describe graph of deaths in Someland and medical research funding in Somelad.

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Describe graph of deaths in Someland and medical research funding in Somelad.

The given graphs reveal the deaths in Someland due to various ailments and amount of money received for these diseases.

It can be clearly seen that TB cab be considered the most perilous ailment in comparison to other disease.TB triggered maximum about 1.8 millions deaths followed by Diarrhoea and Malaria with 0.5 and 0.4 million deaths.Furthermore,Tropical disease caused almost double figure of deaths (0.3) than Leprosy.Lastly,AIDS occupied second last position with 0.2 million deaths.

The second horizontal graph illustrates the figure of Medical research funding amassed for each disease.AIDS was top of the table with $180 million whereas Leprosy and Tropical diseases were accounted for $80 million equally.Diarrhoea was given about three times more than TB ($20 million).Eventually,about $50 million were provided to Malaria.

It is,therefore,clear that TB was a major cause of deaths,however,it received least amount of money and Aids was least disease which attained maximum funds and vice versa.

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