Describe an ideal education system for your country

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Describe an ideal education system for your country.

In today's era , it is necessary for each and every person to realise the value of education. The education system of my country , India is more conventional than progressive. The steps taken for change in education system is at snails space as well as here education is neither job oriented nor student oriented. Here , i would like to establish some drawbacks and also few solutions for improvement.

There are various drawbacks of education system. First and foremost, theoratical knowledge is being provided more to students instead of practical knowledge. Thus, people face lots of problems at...

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Sentence: In today's era , it is necessary for each and every person to realise the value of education.
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Sentence: First and foremost, theoratical knowledge is being provided more to students instead of practical knowledge.
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Sentence: Firstly, practical knowledge will be proove productive to make students more skillful than theoratical one.
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Error: theoratical Suggestion: theoretical

Sentence: All in all, as pe my above discussion, it is evident that change is a part of life and is always required for the progress of mankind in every field.
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